The Real and Made-up of Wake the Hollow
By Gaby Triana
If you’ve read my YA retelling of “The Legend of Sleepy Hollow,” Wake the Hollow, you might’ve found yourself asking, “Does this exist in real life?” As an author, I take liberties when writing, presenting worlds somewhere between truth and imagination, but a lot of those worlds are based on real events.
Because an author’s job is to lie, you shouldn’t expect every single aspect of any fictional world to be real, even those found in contemporary fiction. So, I thought I’d share a list of “Real” and “Made-up” elements for you to enjoy:
Ye Olde Coffee Shoppe – FAKE: It’s inspired by all the “olde”-timey store names of days of yore, but also an homage to the 1949 Disney version of “The Legend of Sleepy Hollow (let’s just call this LOSH from now, shall we?), titled The Adventures of Ichabod and Mr. Toad. In the short cartoon, Brom Bones and his “boon companions” are outside Ye Olde Schnooker and Schnapps Shoppe drowsily wasting time when Ichabod Crane first walks into town. So, yeah, you won’t find the store in Sleepy Hollow, but it’s a cool name, isn’t it?
Tarrytown High School and College – FAKE: Even though Tarrytown, the town adjacent to Sleepy Hollow, does exist just an hour’s drive north of New York City, they don’t have a Tarrytown High or a college by that name. They have SUNY College, College of Westchester, Nyack College, and a host of other fine educational establishments, but none by these names. Hello, fiction.
A Relationship Between Washington Irving and Mary Shelley – RUMORED: If you haven’t read the novel, I wouldn’t want to give away any spoilers, so I’ll just tell you what’s public info for anyone willing to research. Washington Irving, the author of LOSH, and Mary Shelley, author of Frankenstein, were rumored to have had a brief romantic affair in 1825. Some primary documents say that following the death of her husband, poet Percy Bysshe Shelley, Shelley was in dire straights and need of money, so after meeting financially successful Irving at a party in London, pursued him despite several marriage proposals from other well-known literary types, including John Howard Payne. Other documents say they actually hooked up, but because Shelley’s reputation was somewhat tarnished at this point, Irving denied her. There’s a lot more to this, but again—no spoilers.
The Historic Home of Sunnyside – REAL: Washington Irving’s home, Sunnyside, does actually exist in Irvington, NY, and you can visit it anytime during operating hours. In October, take a tour called “The Legend Behind the Legend” that allows visitors access to rarely seen treasures in the house, along with a 19th-century style puppet show depicting the author’s famous tale of Sleepy Hollow.
HollowEve Halloween Festival – FAKE: In Wake the Hollow, Bram Derant and Jonathan Enger spend the better part of their free time preparing for an annual Halloween event called HollowEve. This kind of exists and it kind of doesn’t. The fact is, Sleepy Hollow and Tarrytown have several Halloween events going on in October, such as The Great Jack O’Lantern Blaze, a display of 7,000 hand-carved jack-o-lanterns at Van Cortlandt Manor, Horseman’s Hollow, a haunted recreational town at Philipsburg Manor, and Irving’s Legend, a live retelling of LOSH at the Old Dutch Church in Sleepy Hollow, but for simplicity’s sake, I combined all these events into one creepfest called HollowEve, my dream event!
Sleepy Hollow Cemetery – REAL: This place really does exist. I’ve been there and taken pictures. Set next to the Old Dutch Burying Ground, mentioned by Irving in LOSH, Washington Irving himself is buried there in a family plot, along with other famous folks, such as Elizabeth Arden of cosmetics fame, businessman Andrew Carnegie (of Carnegie Hall fame), businesswoman Leona Helmsley, as well as a few members of the Rockefeller Family. Will you find the Headless Horseman riding around on eerie autumn nights in search of his head? Do like thousands of tourists every October and go find out for yourself.
Historic Hudson Organization – REAL: This is the organization founded by John D. Rockefeller in 1951, responsible for preserving the history of the area. In my novel, I may have painted the families of Historic Hudson in a disparaging light, but hey, I needed to create drama. In real life, they’re perfectly nice people who run a not-for-profit organization, educating and preserving historic homes in Tarrytown and Sleepy Hollow, including Sunnyside, Philipsburg Manor, Van Cortlandt Manor, and Kykuit (the Rockefeller estate…so pretty…I have photos!). Many of their tours are the “living history” kind, where tour guides dress up in the clothing of the time and talk as though they’re from the 19th century. They’re also the ones who put together those fantastic Halloween events dramatized by HollowEve.
So there you have some of the literary liberties I took when writing my book. Have you ever wanted to write a story based on a real-life town? Have you ever read any stories that meshed real-life places with vivid imagination? Where “real” meets “legend?” Tell us! And Happy Fall!
Wake the Hollow
Published by Entangled Teen
Published on August 2nd, 2016
Genre: YA Mystery/Thriller
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Forget the ghosts, Mica. It’s real, live people you should fear.
Tragedy has brought Micaela Burgos back to her hometown of Sleepy Hollow. It’s been six years since she chose to live with her father in Miami instead of her eccentric mother. And now her mother is dead.
This town will suck you in and not let go.
Sleepy Hollow may be famous for its fabled headless horseman, but the town is real. So are its prejudices and hatred, targeting Mica’s family as outsiders. But ghostly voices carry on the wind, whispering that her mother’s death was based on hate…not an accident at all. With the help of two very different guys—who pull at her heart in very different ways—Micaela must awaken the hidden secret of Sleepy Hollow…before she meets her mother’s fate.
Find the answers.
Unless, of course, the answers find you first.
About the Author: Visit her at www.gabytriana.com and @GabyTriana on Twitter.
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The woman’s smoky silhouette hovers over me again.Leave me alone. I cover my eyes, though I can still see her swirling shape through my fingers.She floats closer, wringing her misty hands. You mustn’t ignore me, Micaela. You must come with me.Stop, I won’t go with you! I hate that I can never see her face clearly. Why won’t she leave me alone? Wake up!A long screech rips me from the hazy dream. My eyes fly open, and my hands grip the first thing ahead of me for balance. Seats. Plastic. Brakes hiss to a stop. A drunk old man asleep in a window seat opposite mine stirs. Where am I? The Metro-North train…that’s right. We’ve pulled into Tarrytown station. 11:28 p.m. I almost slept through my stop.Hurrying, I stand to gather my bags, try to shake off the haunting image of the faceless woman. But her voice rings through my brain fog one last time…need to face the inevitable…She got that right.As difficult as this is for me, I have to do it. For my mom. And my sanity.The train doors slide open, and I stumble through them onto the platform. The sweet smell of the river mingled with cold, fresh air hits me. I’m transported six years back, waiting for my southbound train to the city, for my plane out of this forsaken place to go live with Dad in Miami. Don’t think about it, I remind myself. Just do what you came to do, then get back home.The valley hasn’t changed much in six years. The station is still the same old cabin from when I was twelve. Boxy, old houses still sit across the street, and behind me, power lines still ruin the view of the Hudson’s palisades.Lumbering into the station with all my stuff, I see the building is empty except for a woman using the ticket machine, in a hurry so she won’t miss the train. Her little girl has a teddy bear in the crook of one arm and a jacket in the other, all while trying to play a video game on her handheld. “Let’s go, baby.” The mother tugs her child by the elbow clutching the teddy bear. The bear drops to the ground without the girl noticing, and the two move on.I reach down to grab it, my bags slipping off my shoulders and hitting the ground. “Ma’am.” I run over and hand the mother the little girl’s bear.“Oh, thank you so much! She would’ve freaked.” The mom smiles at me.The little girl takes her bear, gives me a shy glance with big brown eyes, and together, they hurry across the platform, jumping onto the train just in time.The doors slide closed. The train slips into the night.She almost left her bear.The very memory I told myself to avoid at all costs comes barreling in—my last day here six years ago. The station’s honey wood paneling, the lines on my mother’s face, how she looked so worn. She’d held a tissue to her stiff lips.Then the worst part—I’d pushed Sofia, the doll she’d made me when I was little, into her hands. “Take care of her for me,” I’d said, though I knew she wouldn’t. Just like she hadn’t taken care of me.Her gaze had gripped me, hazel eyes welling up, burning through pain. “Selfish, like your father,” she’d said. “Go. You two deserve each other.” Then she’d turned and left.I remember standing there shaking, not knowing what to do, what to think, whether I was making a mistake by leaving. But I needed to go. I needed a parent. Sorrow crushing me, I stepped onto the train, and when I reached my father’s arms three thousand miles later, I cried for days.Yet, despite it all, I’m here. Because she asked me to come. Because I want to make things right with her.Because I need closure before I can move on with my life.I wipe my eyes with my sleeve and head outside to find Abraham Derant, my best friend from Sleepy Hollow Past. He’ll probably be the only person happy to see me back. We reconnected online recently, where I had the chance to browse through his selfies and discover that everyone now calls him “Bram,” which makes me laugh, because he always hated his name. But it suits him, too. He’s changed a lot since we were twelve—now he’s big and brawny and athletic—a fact that knots my stomach. I can’t start anything romantic with him, though. One, he’ll always be just Abraham—the boy who grew up with me at Sunnyside, the historic home in town where both our moms worked. He did always try too hard, joke too much…plus he didn’t bathe every day. So, yeah.And two, I won’t be staying long anyway.Get in, get out, go home.All around me, trees rustle in the feisty October breeze. I close my eyes and take in the sounds, breathing deeply. When I reopen them, I spot headlights coming down the hill, then a car turns out of my view and heads into the adjacent parking lot. Nerves flutter in my stomach. In a minute, Abraham—Bram—will be live in front of me again after all these years.Around the corner of the station, a car door slams shut, and heavy boots step onto the wooden walkway leading to the building. I get my friendliest smile ready. “Hey, you.”The sound stops. No one appears. But I heard someone. I know I did. “Hello?”With my bags, I trudge to the other side of the station where the parking lot is. There’s an old blue Eclipse, ticking as its engine cools off in the chilly night, but no Bram. Maybe I should’ve asked what car he’d be driving. I call him, but it goes straight to voicemail—Greetings, I’m being held captive by an army of Amazons. Don’t try to find me. Beep…“Hey. I’m at the station. Call me.” I hang up, about to text him, when another text comes in from Nina, my dad’s assistant, telling me the townhouse key won’t be available until tomorrow, so I should check into a Days Inn instead.“Ugh.” Hell no. I’ll ask Bram if I can stay with him before I stay in some cheap motel by myself.I’m a few letters into my reply when I hear it— “Lela.” A whisper.Nobody calls me that anymore. Only Mami—my mom. Sometimes Bram did, a long time ago. To everyone else, I’ve always been Micaela or Mica. The chill in the air deepens. I pocket my phone and hug my bags tightly to fight off the cold. Suddenly, I hear something even weirder than the whisper—the clop of a horse’s hoof.But why would… I smirk. Sleepy Hollow, boots, horseman. Okay, I get it.“Cut it out, I know it’s you,” I tell the emptiness. It’s a small town. In small towns, people make up their own entertainment. And Bram Derant has always been king of entertainment around here. “Where are you?”I head to the shadowy recesses behind the station, bracing for his surprise attack, but I don’t see him. Then, in on the breeze comes mumbling near my ear. I can’t understand what it’s saying. I swallow softly. The voices are back, torturing me again. Jesus, I’ve been here less than five minutes, and already, this town is haunting me.“Bram?” I call out, even though I know it wasn’t him.Nothing. Just wind, crickets, and tinkling chimes from somewhere nearby.“Fine, I’m leaving, then.” I spin and hurry across the road toward Route 9. I still know my way around and will walk to Bram’s apartment if I have to, I don’t care. I think I hear soft footsteps behind me, but when I glance over my shoulder at the army of shadows I’m leaving behind, there’s no one.Faster up the hill, away from the riverbank, I walk in the middle of the street. Visibility is higher here, away from stalkers in bushes and other hiding places. Wow. I’m really thinking like the city girl I’ve become. No one ever gets attacked in Sleepy Hollow in real life.The smell of lavender, my mother’s favorite, fills my senses. I stop in my tracks. Mami? My ears strain to hear. On the street, a crumpled gum wrapper rocks in the wind. Moths dance beneath the dim street lamp, and assorted pumpkins sit on front porches like families gathered in the dark, telling ghost stories.“Come out already!” I cry aloud.In the distance, a dog howls a sad reply.Then, from a side street, a low voice emerges. “Micaela Burgos, as bossy as ever.”Even in the dark, I make out his wide smile, as mischievous as the day he sat in the corner of Ms. Sanstet’s Pre-K class for putting sand in my shoes. His hair has darkened since I last saw him, short on the sides, long on top. “God, you scared me.” My hand presses against my chest. Because he startled me, or because I’m seeing him again after six years? Not sure.“Sorry. But finally, you’re here!” He pumps his fist in the air and emerges from the shadows into the cone of light cast from a nearby lamppost. I’m hit with the full picture I can’t quite get from his pics online. Wearing jeans and a black sweater, keys in hand, Bram makes his way down the street. He’s super gorgeous with wide shoulders, over six feet tall, and sigh, this will be tough.“Thank you, thank you. My flight got in late, then I had to wait to take the next train, and…”His dark brown eyes soak me in underneath heavy brows. He shakes his head.“What? Why are you looking at me like that?” I ask.“Nothing, you just…” He blinks a few times. That rascal smile.I cock my head. “I just what?”“You don’t look twelve anymore.” He laughs, letting out a low whistle. “Holy shit, Mica. You are one fine woman.”I grin in spite of myself. Apparently, someone learned to flirt while I was away. “Uh, thanks.”“You’re so welcome. And what’s this?” He gestures to my clothes and purse. His eyes land on the tag hanging from it. “MK? Code for Micaela?”“Wow, really?” I shake my head. “Michael Kors?”“Forgive me, Miss Burgos. I keep forgetting you’re a Miami girl now.” He glances down at his clothes. “And me in my Gap jeans and ten-dollar sweater.”“Stop, you look fine.” Way more than fine. Hot. Pick-me-up-and-carry-me-straight-into-hell hot. But no. God, no. I can’t tell him that. I shouldn’t even think that. He’s good ol’ Abraham from back in the day, nothing more, nothing less. “You look…uh…great!” I say instead. “Just like your thousands of selfies.”“Oh? I post too many, do I?” He clucks his tongue and makes silly duck lips. “As if you don’t post pics every day from your gleaming white mansion.”Is that all I’m going to be while I’m here? The holes-in-her-Payless-shoes-turned-rich-girl? “Not a mansion. Just a house.”“It’s nicer than where I live.” He raises an eyebrow, the funny-faced kid I remember poking through.Ugh, I should’ve left the bag at home. Then again, it feels strangely satisfying being able to show that we’ve come such a long way. “Anyway…” I try not to feel his resentful jab. “Come help me with these bags already.”His eyes chastise me.“Please?”“Hmm, I was waiting for the magic word.” Bram grabs my bags out of my tired hands, but instead of carrying them off to his car, he places them at his feet. Suddenly, his arms are enveloping me, my cheek against his broad chest. Bone-crushing, heartbeat-skipping, a nice…really nice hug. And hey, how about that? He bathes now.God, he smells good. Like the woods by my old house after an autumn storm.Still, it takes me a moment to melt into him. I’ve pushed this corner of the world out of my mind for so long, tried forgetting the pain, that I almost can’t give in. But some things are worth remembering. I allow my arms to wrap around him and lean into his solid body.“There you go,” he whispers. Do not cry, I tell myself. Do not. “Sorry, Mica.”“No, don’t. I don’t want to talk about it.”“Okay.” His clean scent is laced with underlying familiarity. Another memory—us at Kingsland Point Park, by the lighthouse, the day I left. He’d told me he loved me, a pretty bold move for a twelve-year-old. It shocked me at the time. I’d pushed him away gently, not ready to feel that way, but now…I pull back, reeling, pressing my sleeve against my eyes. “Were you the one sneaking around back there, scaring the crap out of me?”“Me? I sneak not.” He lifts my bags again and hoists them onto his new muscle-man shoulders.“Over there?” I point toward the station. “You weren’t going, Lellaaaa?”“Nope, I just got here. They close the pickup/drop-off area after eleven, so I parked over there.” He points down a street. “Voices still torturing you, Mica?”He always loved teasing me about my peculiar “talent.” I guess he still doesn’t believe I can hear them, whoever they belong to. “You’re in a blue Eclipse?”“Black Accord. Mom’s old car. Everything okay?”Black Accord? But then…who was walking around? I could’ve sworn… I rub my eyes and suck in a deep breath. After the sleepless nights I’ve had over the last month, it’s not hard to believe I might’ve imagined it all. “Fine. I’m just exhausted. Hey, is it okay if I stay with you tonight? Change of plans. My townhouse key isn’t ready for pickup.”“Of course, Princess, you know you can. You’ll get to see our amazing palace. Let’s get thee off to bed! Your chariot awaits.” He struts off toward his car.Princess. I say nothing about his new nickname for me, but he knows he’s hit a nerve.He cocks an eyebrow back at me. “It was just a joke, Mica. I know you can take the girl out of Sleepy Hollow but not Sleepy Hollow out of the girl. Face it. This town is, and always will be, your home.” He pops the trunk and tosses my heavy bags inside like they’re filled with nothing but feathers. Then he rounds the car to open the passenger door for me. Before I have the chance to sit down, he kisses my cheek. “So welcome home.”I give him a half smile then stare out at the quiet, sleeping town. Home. I don’t have the heart to tell him I stopped thinking of this place as home a long time ago. But if anyone can make me think of Sleepy Hollow that way again, it’d be Bram.Especially now that Mami is dead.